Thread:Haldarn/@comment-24692831-20170901105851/@comment-195370-20170901182555

Content-wise, a couple of suggestions in case you didn't know and wanted to include:
 * The tutorial NPC will give you a voucher for a Chariot Band, but when you visit the Conquest NPC, you can actually grab either a Chariot, Empress or Emperor band - certainly cheaper and quicker than building up the CP. Means getting that Warp Ring a little quicker.
 * Prior to the Warp Ring, Scrolls of Instant Warp can be gotten from the Artisan Moogle for free once per rl day, which might also save on CP.
 * Vana'versary RoEs will be there after May 2018, just without the dial key rewards. I mention this because the XP bonuses for some of the trivial tasks are significant at the start of the game, eg "Get Signet", "Gastro Revolution" and "Claret Carp" are all 1,115XP each, which if you time them right are an entire level's worth of XP.

The best thing you can do for formatting is to add pictures. The wiki should already have everything you need; the code is simply with parameters of | and/or | px.

The next thing you might want to do is consider headings and sub-headings and tie them together with your own table of contents, formatted to look a little nicer than the basic one, which takes up a lot of space. Adding " " anywhere on the page will remove a basic table of contents. One like I've used at the top of User:Haldarn/West Ronfaure can be used to replace it, or one by your own design, or maybe instead..

You might either want to consider splitting the page into a number of separate pages with a navigation pane, or by using 'collapsible' elements to reduce the page length (as per the West Ronfaure link above).

I'm working on my own project at the moment, else I'd dive in directly and get on with all of this for you! However, if it's beyond your own time and/or inclination, try grabbing a fellow regular editor (those names cropping up often on the Recent Activity sidebar) by posting on their wall, or put a shout out on our Discord channel for assistance, which is steadily growing, now at over 150 members.

Overall great job! Once you're happy with the layout, let me know and I'll link it up to the front page. Then be prepared to get a ton of feedback and suggestions on its talk page from the community! :P